Apollo
Apollo
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AuDHD Sleepy creature, artist, fish and shrimp Dad, 3D maker, astronomy enthusiast, gamer, homesteader
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Melanie Scearce
It will take practice to internalize it as a part of your process, especially if you have to unlearn old habits, so you really have to stick with it! The key is to start very lightly with your lines, and only darken the lines that you feel confident in. As you go around the page and lay in your shapes, stay light enough that you can just barely see your lines. There is no reasonable expectation that the first lines you put down will be correct. You will need to adjust things as you go, so stay light, light enough that there is no reason to erase. After you have your layin of basic shapes that represent the proportions of what you're drawing is the time to do another pass and start to define the contours. Stan shows this process starting at 2:20 in the demo here: https://www.proko.com/course-lesson/demo-simplify-snail-and-boots-to-csi/comments Practice with the pressure that you put on your pencil while drawing. Drill your lines -- start light and gradually increase pressure with each line that you do. Practice with straights and curves. Focus on building your muscle memory so you don't have to think about it while you're drawing.
Apollo
10d
Okay thanks so much!! I really need to work on pressure - I have arthritis so I tend to push harder to stabilize myself on paper and depend on stabilizer settings heavily in digital.  I'll be more cognizant of how hard I'm pressing while doing drills! I am very grateful for the thorough explanation of building up a line, it was a concept I was simply not clicking with until you showed the demonstration here
Apollo
So I started with drawabox to try to learn the fundamentals, and that accidentally taught me that habit of trying to make my sketches in a single smooth stroke, on the first try. I came to proko and we're trying to build line quality but I'm stuck in between what I feel is almost chicken scratching but with longer lines, or putting down a single smooth line which Stan mentioned in a critique isn't what we're trying to go for. not sure how to actually build up a line as a shape while I'm sketching, and/or being unable to remember how to do it the way Stan does while i'm drawing something. I should also mention that neither way of putting a line down for a sketch currently feels natural to me, but i keep hearing my subconscious telling me to put down one smooth line and make it accurate (which i really dislike the look of)
Apollo
I was procrastinating doing this project for a while, I was too intimidated to even try for a bit til i just decided it's not meant to be a masterpiece, just to learn. my observations are brush pen is very difficult to learn to control line weight but I wanted to try to replicate how Takeyasu Sawaki did the line strokes it looks like he used watercolor and colored pencil in the rest of the illustration but i wanted to focus on the brush pen lines he uses thicker lines to indicate joints and muscles, and short little strokes for fur tufts i also think going slower is the key with a brush pen
Apollo
18d
forgot to mention that I got myself a tilting tabletop drawing board/easel and it solved most of my problems with drawing traditionally vs digitally
Ben Johnston
This is my first digital submission and wow! Talk about learning a new skillset!! It took me way longer than I expected just to get used to the brushes. The first image is the importance method and the second is the light direction with the light source placed at the left of the rhino. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
Apollo
20d
haha I'm going from digital to traditional and it's just as difficult!! your lines are very well organized to highlight the silhouette of the rhino in the first one, the second is also very intentional with the placements where shadow would be so i think you did great!
Apollo
my only note is i feel like i'm really making it harder on myself with traditional materials with a death grip and no slanted surface where i have to think about these things, instead of doing it digitally where it's automatic for me to hold the stylus properly of course i'm taking the course to get better at these things but man it's humbling
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Patrick Bosworth
Nice work! I love the personality you've injected into this, the googly eyes and the extra round abdomen really takes the spider design from creepy-crawly to adorable. Reminds me of Lucas the Spider! Keep up the good work!
Apollo
I left the construction lines in, and simplified the details, so I wouldn't trap myself into focusing on contours vs shapes and volumes, plus construction lines prevent me from becoming confused. My biggest barrier right now is drawing shapes in a notebook or on my desk where my arm or sleeve gets caught on the spirals, paper, or edge of the desk and I have to redraw something 30 times :(
Apollo
24d
I also still struggle with pencil pressure as most of my art career i've drawn digitally and pressed really hard
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Asked for help
The laces were confusing and overwhelming, my brain made up some lines and they might not make sense in my portrayal right boot was done after watching demo, critique, and taking a break i love snails, I actually have several (hundred) as pets! if anyone can explain how to simplify the laces or not get lost in the details, that would be great <3
Melanie Scearce
Did you say several HUNDRED snails? That's so cool haha. Where do they all live? Your lines look a lot more confident in your second boot. In areas of complex detail I think the best thing to do is slow down and just go as fast as you're able to think. Even if you feel like you're going too slow, don't rush yourself. When your thoughts get jumbled so will your lines. Speed will increase with practice so best to form good habits in the beginning, which will compound over time. I think you did a great job with this project. Your snail looks awesome!
Apollo
Apollo
29d
Tried to apply what i learned from: Project - Simplify from Observation to a still life subject that was a little more interesting to me , while learning watercolor control
Apollo
Really struggled with overall using traditional materials, and being able to see 5 values was very difficult, at most i saw 4 and made up where i thought 5 (darkest) would be based on the light source. this exercise did help a lot to be able to understand where contour lines should be placed on a 3D form, which is something i was struggling with for awhile if i were to retry this, I'd squint or blur my eyes at the reference to simplify the shadows more easily
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