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Sita Rabeling
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added comment inDemo 2 - Value Composition Thumbnails - Level 1
Trial and error. It’s not easy to let go of what the reference gives.
I like the last two digital trials. I was hoping the last one with markers would have turned out better.
@drawingdodo
6d
Very cool designs, I think you did a great job on this one
@drawingdodo
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13d
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Took a long time for this one, need to get back on track! Still, thumbnails are quite cool, definitely how I'll be trying out things in the beginning moving forward. Always looking for constructive criticisms!
@mstefan
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14d
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hi guys,those are my level 1 assignments attempts. Idon t know exactly how I can make them a little more interesting, I think I went very safely and didn't think outside the box enough.
I really like them, and although some may be close in terms of tone, I still think you did a good job of experimenting with different value structures for different results for sure, great work!
FlummoxMe
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16d
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Cool abstractions! My favourite is the 9th one for sure, the most striking for sure. One critique I might give is to try practicing more even tones, some parts are a bit scratchy like the first image. Maybe a by-product of a small sketch (which is the point of a thumbnail :D ) but maybe something to improve in the future. Great work!
Rohit M
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6mo
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A bit late on this, but took my time in trying to draw with perspective - still the meat grinder from a 'ant' view looks odd to me - will try again. Tried to make a story out of level 2 figures - had fun! Now, going to watch the demos.
Great work! I think the meat grinder from an ant perspective feels off because it should converge more to the top. When you’re dealing with more extreme perspective, things start distorting a lot more at the edges. If you try to draw just a cube from an ant POV, you’ll see why everything distorts, since everything needs to be in that smaller space. Keep up the awesome drawings!
Lisanne
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8mo
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I made a treehouse too! It's a little on the safe side. But I'm quite happy with it.
For perspective I angled the upper house as if looking up on it, and the bottom house like I'm almost at eye level (but looking from a distance, say a small hill. I hope that comes across.
I've included my ideas page as well with the rough idea (and a second idea).
Interesting concept and nice designs! One thing I would suggest is to perhaps focus more on your cross-contours, they're making the tree itself look flatter than it should be. If you captured the roundness of the cylinders, it would make the drawing have much more depth! Keep it up :)
Edo Moya
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9mo
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Well those gingers where a real meditation, so nice to draw. I decided to work the beetle a little loose because it was more enjoyable that way 🪲 hehe sorry about that. I'll try another round of different creatures tomorrow morning and see how it goes.
![onigi *pronunce [on-ie-gee]*](https://static.proko.com/assets/images/avatars/dr-i-cube-40@2x.png)
onigi *pronunce [on-ie-gee]*
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11mo
Thank you so much for the critique!
I found it hilarious that you show how to pronounce your name, and he goes "I'll name you Pronounce"
