It was my first time using the graph paper even though I had it for a while now. I probably should have use the tools instead of freehand. I'm pretty sure I was more comfortable doing straight lines freehand in the past, but I guess doing only live caricatures for a couple of years now plus the carpal tunnel atrophied that skill, or maybe I'm just been to conscious. Also maybe it was the flat angle of the table also. Should I just keep practice straight lines until they become second nature again, and not worried? Other than that, what can you see in these Orthoventions that needs work? Thank you for your time.

I try these quick iterations after watching the video. I haven't draw gestures in a while and I always do the timed sketches, but I feel like I'm still to trapped with contours even thou I always go for feeling and flow. Any advice?

Thanks for the advice Marshall.

I don't know if I'm still on time for chance to be critique or if it's gonna be a critique video of this lesson, but here's my first try on a freehand orthos. But of course because I had to shoot myself in the foot by choosing one of the most difficult Rider Machines possible for this exercise, just because the current season of Kamen Rider is soooooo good. I kinda have this bad habit of rushing to towards the end of a long drawing, which makes me kind of mess-up a little by the end. Any advice to fix that? I can already see where are some errors. I may try doing with tools next, but I will choose something more simple next time. I would love to hear any feedback.

I had to speedrun this ones today since is my day off. I apologize for my lack of imagination and poor line quality making these Rapid Iterations. I would like some advice regrading improving my imagination and line quality when I have such a limited time. I have Carpal Tunnel and I work as a Live Caricature so I mostly leave drawing for work, but since is soon going to be spring break I may not have much time for the Orthos. What advice could you give to tackle that?

This is probably all I can do for now. I would try to make one more before the 5th. But what can you see needs work here? (Besides the clean-up) And of my roughs which one you like the better?

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Here's two more, I think the second one turn out the best, but I'm still not satisfy with the line quality and the shapes. But in terms of perspective what needs to be improve?

Ok, I watched the lesson yesterday and did this one today at work because things were going slow, so I went from what I could remember from the assignment. I'm gonna watch the lesson again and retry with the information fresh in my mind. The one thing I did neglect was setting a timer for this. When I submit more, should I do it in the comment session of this video or the second video? What do you see needs works? (Besides line quality)

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