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Steve Lenze
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8mo
added comment inLandscape studies
The biggest issue is that everything looks flat because all the lighting is flat. To give dimension you need a shadow side and light side.
Also, you need to add atmospheric perspective to make things in the far background recede and not fight for attention with the foreground. This includes softening the edges, lowering contrast, and desaturating the colors.
You need to also vary your color choices, everything is the same color through out the whole scene. Add some variation of warm and cool colors.
I did a quick paint over to show you what I mean, it's very rough but you should see what I'm getting at :)
Braydon Piper
8mo
thank you! This is super helpful, I definetly see a big difference with the paint over.
Hello, these are some landscape studies from recently, I can’t post the actual paintings because of the file size so I took screenshots. I obviously need to keep studying the fundamentals I’m learning but was wondering if anything sticks out that I could do better. I spent the least amount of time on the rocky beach one and it was the most difficult for me because of the water so it’s definitely more messy than the other two.
Hi Braydon
Good job on getting all those muscles into the skeleton. They are all there and most of them in the right places. I see a few mistakes in where you have attached some of the muscles. For example the trapezius originates on the base of the skull, a bit lower than where you put it. The sternocleidomastoid inserts into the mastoid process of the skull. (You can feel this process behind your ear) a bit lower and to the front of where you put it. Also check your lats and abs, especially in the side view.
I wonder what your studying process is. Trying to add muscles onto a skeleton is quite hard, I usually try to copy from a 3D model first (Proko’s are great), then trace some real pictures, then I go back to my copies to see if I need to adjust or change anything, and after all that I try to draw them from imagination. This helps to understand the form of these muscles. I imagine them a bit like worms, or even horns sometimes. I also focus on a few muscles only. Maybe two or three.
I also look a lot and draw over the Houdon model. You can find some images of a corrected version by Scott Eaton.
One last thing, colour coding helps me a lot.
hope this helps, let me know if you have any questions.
Dani
This is my first time drawing muscles over a skeleton like this, was a little confusing and I didn’t try to get the muscle fibers perfect obviously, I just want them going in the right direction.
Braydon Piper
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1yr
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I made this a little faster than I maybe should have, but I made sure the sink was very awkward. I’m going to check out the level 2 project next!
Braydon Piper
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1yr
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Fun assignment! Feel free to critique, these were all 5 min gestures.
Braydon Piper
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1yr
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I did all these with the references, I will definitely do some more without reference.
Braydon Piper
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2yr
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Struggled a bit with this so I did two of them, the proportions are not perfect on either of them ( I checked in photoshop) but the second one I did is much closer. I was using my pencil to measure everything out so I probably just wasn’t accurate enough with that. Feel free to critique or give tips
also I did realize the angle of the head is wrong on the second one, I made it too straight.