Danet
Madrid
Ask me for feedback on Gesture or Perspective. I won’t say no, how could I?
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Danet
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9mo
added comment inLoomis Skull Step by Step
Hi K.C.
I’m not a great fan of Loomis, I just feel it doesn’t really work for me. I don’t have any tutorials on skulls, but Michael Mattesi from Force drawing has a great exercise. Using some reference in different angles try finding the perspective box and drawing a skull inside. Once you have mastered that, try it the opposite way. First you draw the skull and then check drawing the box over it.
You will get some insights into the proportions as you do that. The main problem with proportions is that they change because of perspective. I absolutely love the 3 hour long video of Steve Huston https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=2T7cDY7YDsg it’s free on youtube. It doesn’t focus on skulls though, but on heads.
Hope this helps and let me know if you find any good tutorials.
Dani
@akif
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9mo
Some things I've realized while staring at this for hours:
1. The gesture of the arm is completely off. This is supposed to be a relaxed pose of the whole arm, so the forearm should have a 30-45° tilt to the left.
2. The wrist is completely wrong (has no 3D aspect to it), even though I know the wrist has a rectangle shape to it I still managed to mess it up.
3. I don't know why the tricep is looking so gigantic even though I checked its proportion compared to the bicep.
4. I guess I should've used a box shape for the upper arm before putting in the muscles. Just so that it has a 3D feel to it.
5. Of course the muscle shapes and " line movement" are a bit off as well.
These are the things I can see for now, and needless to say any additional feedback would be great!
Thanks once again.
Danet
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2yr
hey, @knightdroid I’m not sure what you mean by moving the camera sideways. But distortion usually happens when we draw things that are outside of our cone of vision, this is what happens with fisheye lenses. Nevertheless, even when boxes warp, they still converge in the same way. Take a look at my corrections for box 1. (Box 2 is better.) Getting this right is hard by the way, I still occasionally slip
Hope this helps, let me know if you have any questions
Hi, @kingofstones09
it’s great that you’re iterating, and you’re definitely have the right idea about creating an abstract version of the figure. The next step for you, I think, is to create something closer to what you are seeing.
you want to get a more accurate version of the torso, that will help to give your figures some weight.
Take a look at my versions, they are still super abstract. I also have some notes about the centre of gravity in my gesture folder that might help to.
keep up the good work and let me know if you have any questions.
@silentmoonss
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2yr
Asked for help
Excuse me @Danet I’m sorry for tagging you and u don’t know me but I could really use some help and feedback. if u can please assist me in this pose I’m not sure exactly how she’s pushing her hips forward and keeping her legs locked I can’t really see her Asis so I only go about her belly button I just need some clarification of how she’s doing this pose and how exactly to emphasize the push of her hips, to me that is the story of this pose and I’m trying to exaggerate it more. The image closer to the reference is an old one and the other two are my latest attempts I have many more but there all messy.
Week 29: continued with gesture drawings and the proko basics course. For fun drawing, i discovered the "reddit gets drawn" community https://www.reddit.com/r/redditgetsdrawn/ where i tried to cartoonize some people :). Also had some great feedback from different people in this topic. For the upcoming week i will continue gesture drawing.
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Week 28: continued with the gesture drawings. Took some time to read @Danet gesture critiques and watched some videos about FORCE gesture drawing. Based on Danet's advice i've included the references from wich i drew the gestures. I'm not sure i'm getting it though. I've tried to simplify the gestures and draw less.
Also continued to do an assignment from Stan's drawing basics course where we had to draw a creature from imagination based on reference. I had fun drawing this prussian basset hound general.
Danet
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2yr
Hi, I think you’re doing fine. maybe the tail on the first lizard could be clarified a bit more, but on the rest looks pretty solid. Good work
Week 27: continued with the gesture drawings, which i did digitally. Also continued with Stan's beginner course with some line drawing assignments (the hand, penguins and the robot girl-thing). For fun i drew some stylized/ cartoonized people from references i've found on Pinterest.