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@brevittyy
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4yr
added comment inLooking for Face Drawing Critique
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Hey guys, i have done some loomis head drawing . Pls let me know if there is anything wrong or what shoul i improve in my head drawing.🐼
Sketcher Ameya
4yr
It's all right men
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4yr
Nice work and most of the feature tilt lines look good. On a couple of heads the feature tilt lines look a bit out of alignment. Its a good idea to double check these lines that the features will be mapped to later. It will help avoid drawing wonky eyes or having a nose out of alignment. I still have to remind myself to double check my work. lol
Kelsey Lee Martin
4yr
Looks good. I think including the neck muscles that meet at the sternum will help the gesture, and including just a hint at the traps and/or shoulders will be a good way to level up this practice
Lesly Farran
4yr
looking good!
@brevittyy
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4yr
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Hey guys, i tried mannequin pls let me know how are they and what should i improve.😺
It's really good! I really like the dynamic pose of the left model but she is sort of missing her left leg. Because the left side of her hip and her left foot are both resting on the ground plane, there must be space under her right thigh through which we should see some portion of her left thigh or calf. If her left leg is at such a sharp angle that we can't see that, then we should see her left knee behind her right thigh. Hopefully that makes sense.
These look good. If you just keep doing them and pay attention to proportion and perspective they will continue to improve. You can also break the foot into 2 or 3 parts to get the position right. The heel midsection and toes can all be separated.
It looks fine to me. But I have a big concern, on the second drawing you draw the pelvis with two side plains, don't do that. We are trying to simplify everycing into simple shapes and the pelvis we draw it as a box. So you have to think of a box while drawing it and a simple box can't show two side plains, it's impossible. For that to happen it would mean that the box it's expanding, the plane we are facing is smaller than the one that is facing away from us.
I hope that helps!
@brevittyy
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4yr
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Hello everybody😀
I have been doing some robo bean. Pls let me know if im doing something wrong, it would be very helpful.😀
Very well done, I believe. The second one starting from the top might have the center line of the tórax box a little bit off.
I would say that you hit the nail on the head and did a good job.
Only, in the first sketch, the pelvis and ribcage are connected in a somewhat rigid manner, with a straight line.
This is probably because the ribcage is a bit set back and you couldn't reach its edge in a smooth curve.
For the rest I'd say keep it up and you're doing well :)
Overall these look pretty good! The ribcage box on the first (top) one looks a little long, and the middle section on the bottom left one looks long as well. I hope that was helpful :)
