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Ahmed Salahuddine
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8mo
added comment inProject - Rhythms
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My trial after watching the demos and critique, practicing both the overhand grip and line quality + being flowy
Robert
8mo
the first two picture I really do like. Nice use of line weight and the poses look very good and clear. On the other two images you weren't as deliberate with your line weight imo. Other than that I love those
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Dynamic and well balanced gesture drawings! Keep up the good work :)
Ahmed Salahuddine
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10mo
For critique I put both pictures beside each other through collage option via any application. It does a good job
Ahmed Salahuddine
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10mo
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Line Master Studies
1- After @davemalanart
2-After @glenkeaneprd
3-After @glenkeaneprd
4-After @charles_dana_gibson
@Martha Muniz what do you think
Wow, really well done! I like how you have managed to vary the line weight in the first one in order to be appropriate for each part you are drawing. And also you managed to keep the lines very quick and rough on the third one whilst keeping the structure of the figure. The other two are also really good. You captured the quality of the originals.
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10mo
Hi Ahmed, happy new year!
I think it's looking pretty good as a whole. Something you could do for the Hierarchy version is to continue emphasizing the outline of the rhino. Right now, the outline seems to be about the same weight as some inner wrinkles and face features, which makes it compete against a fair amount of detail, but adding a thicker outline can make the figure as a whole pop and add more range to your line weight variation.
For the Light and Shadow version, I would recommend darkening the area near the face and lightening the wrinkles near the back a bit more, to really communicate that the light is coming from behind.
10 mins each. Had fun!
