please can anyone critique
2yr
Anubhav Saini
hello everyone the goal of this drawing was to learn about anatomy
.Is the structure and gesture right
.Is the anatomy right
.also give your feedback on shape design
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2yr
Hey, @Anubhav Saini! I see you already got some helpful feedback from @Steve Lenze.
You said your goal with these drawings was to learn about anatomy - but what exactly about anatomy are you trying to learn?
The biggest thing I notice is that your anatomy drawing doesn't relate to your gesture and structural drawings at all.
The reason for this is because you are doing the gesture drawing separate from the other drawings that come after it.
Your anatomy doesn't relate to your structural drawing for the same reason, It's completely separate from each other.
You need to build off the previous drawing so that you carry all the gesture and structure into your anatomy drawing. I did a quick sketch to show you what I mean :)
Thank you very much for your feedback and by the way i built the structure on top of it and for presentation purpose uploded them seperately but i will rectify my mistake