Help TvT on Figure Drawing
4yr
 Lien Hoa 
Hello everyone, so i’m trying to draw 2 dudes sitting next to each other; 
but my drawing-from-imagination skill sucks and i had to combine 2 different  photos of them from different angles/perspective… 
so 
i’d like to ask if my drawing is believable enough? and please tell me if i can improve anything in the pose. Thank you ^^
( >< please have a look: @Liandro @Jesper Axelsson @Tony Vu )
Attached are my drawing and 2 references i used.