Eagle - Looking for critique
2yr
Michael de Graaf
Any feedback is more then welcome.
Hallo @Michael de Graaf , goed om hier een andere Nederlander te zien :)
I like the drawing and I think @Steve Lenze already gave great feedback, what i would like to add is that you could work on your values. For example the shadow underneath the beak could be a lot darker and the body is almost black. Darken these values will make your drawing look more 3d and dramatic.
Haha kijk aan, leuk. Hoe gaat het met je reboot in art learning? Ik zit sinds een paar weken in hetzelfde bootje, voel mijn passie voor tekenen terugkeren, heerlijk.
Thanks allot for you feedback.
Hey Michael,
I really like your drawing, it has a lot of personality.
A couple of nit picky things I would say you could work on has to do with the expression. I did a quick sketch to show you what I mean, I hope it helps :)
Hey Steve, thank you for taking the time to give some very good feedback.
Haha yes it does look likes he is smiling.
Very sharp feedback about the eye, I agree, such a small tweak can make allot of impact because I wanted to draw the attention to the eyes.