Twylo
Twylo
Poulsbo, WA, USA
Software engineer who wants to draw
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Peter N
I'm having trouble understanding how this exercise is supposed to be differnt from the previous one with the snail and the boots and it makes me feel like I'm missing something. I might just be overthinking it, but can someone give a hint?
Twylo
2yr
Take this with a huge grain of salt because I'm just another student, not a teacher, but I think the difference is that the previous exercise focused on simplifying using very clean and deliberate lines, but this exercise is focusing on "loosening up" those lines, allowing you to lay down a bunch of experimental free form lines while you try to hone in on the right C, S, and I curves. At least, that's what I got from the video.
Twylo
Asked for help
Woah boy. This exercise is rough, I'm just finding it so hard to control the pencil from my shoulder and elbow and to make confident strokes. The long curve of the snail shell is particularly rough, and I had to fight the urge to make it up of lots of small segments. This was maybe my eighth or ninth attempt and, the first one that was even a little acceptable to me.
Ben M
Asked for help
Gave it a shot. Really struggle with line control, so I'm excited to practice more. Some of the sloppiness is because I started to add more detail lines but then decided against it, but I drew the lines too dark to erase fully :(
Twylo
2yr
I’m finding line control to be incredibly hard too. They say it gets better with practice, and I hope they’re right
Twylo
I think this critique video has been incredibly useful. I really urge people not to skip it, it has TONS of information in it, I feel like it's essential viewing. I've seen a lot of my own mistakes in the video, which is helpful. I guess the only frustrating thing is that so much of my struggle is just down to not being able to control my pencils as well as I wish I could, but that will probably just come from more practice and more experience.
Twylo
I'm late to the party because I just started the course, but here's my first attempt using Reference Pear #1. I'm not happy with it, but I'm really glad I did it. It was pretty hard for a complete beginner like me, so I think I'll do this assignment again a couple of times after I watch the demo in the next lesson. My choice of paper was probably wrong, I think it's too textured. (EDIT: Of course now that I'm watching the demo, I realize I completely left off the shadow. Ha! I'll definitely do a couple more now...)
Twylo
2yr
My second attempt, after watching the demo, went a little better. I'm still not happy with it, but I'm learning, and that's the important thing. This is Demo Pear #3.
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