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Tania Roman
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3yr
I want your guys opinion on how I can improve this. One of my friends said it looks kind of like a caricature. Mind you, I know nothing about caricature or how to even go about that. But feedback is very much appreciated:)
Rizwan Piracha
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3yr
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Hi Guys, Landmark assignments attached. Any feedback appreciated!
I genuinely tried my best cuz I don't have a stylus, but this is an idea of what it should look like
Your effort really shows! I am practicing the simple head most of all since it is a lot faster to finish. I hope you learned a lot!
Tania Roman
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3yr
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This is my very first attempt with mannequinization. Any critique is greatly appreciated
Tania Roman
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3yr
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Wanted to try drawing the rib cage from different angles. Particularly the back
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3yr
Looks awesome!
Tania Roman
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3yr
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I tried my best with drawing the pelvis from more extreme angles. I feel I tend to draw the Iliac crests a bit too tall and it looks funny. I just want to know how I can fix that and make my elipses look more natural
Bucket assignment... I have been working with elipses since going over the previous assignments, but they are still a bit shaky, I want to eventually get them down to 1 or 2 passes instead of the multiple passes I do to get them.
Very well done. They feel very solid.
I would like to advise you to draw bigger. I feel that you did all of those the same size. That may lead to a bad habit and you may be too used to draw small. Exercise using your whole arm to draw.
Also practice different angles. Most of these are pelvis viewed from top/lateral. Try drawing them from the bottom, or front view slightly to one side. You will get a better understanding on how it moves in space.
Best Regards
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4yr
again really good work Tania!
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4yr
Great work on these! I think the first one with the full back pose looks a bit stiff due to drawing the gesture line (or spine) not as curved as in the reference pic. In this case you could pull a vertical line from the outside of shoulder down and see where it hits the hips. Helps us to see how the weight of the shoulders are positioned over the hips. Hope I made sense there lol
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4yr
You're doing great! What kind of pencil are you using? It looks like it may be a very soft pencil like a 6B or something. I asked because I noticed a lot of smudging on the paper. You may try placing a scrap piece of clean paper under your hand to prevent the smudging or use a harder type pencil like a 2b. Lovely drawings!
