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Kelly
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5mo
added comment inProject - Organizing Line Weight
This was a fun project! For the hierarchy, I wanted to emphasize the weight of the rhino, and I tried my best with light and shadow line weight.

Angiev
4mo
Great job, I'm a learner on this line weight as well I too tried to empasis weight. I notice ours look different in both with line thickness but believe they make the point.
Kelly
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6mo
All post-demo.
I like how these turned out, and I hope I captured the rhythm and expressions in each drawing.
Kelly
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6mo
Post-Demo
The shoe laces were the most difficult for me to draw. It is tough to make them the same size, and I think they look too stiff, to be honest.
But other than that, I really like the idea of mapping out the big shapes first and then adding the contours. It improved my drawings.
Great improvement from the pre-demo attempts. I can see your confidence in your lines shows through much more in these. Well done!
Cara Galbavi
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6mo
Asked for help
Simplify to CSI Level 1 Assignment. First pic was pre-demo. Happy with that attempt, but way too much detail. Second attempt (days after I watched demo), I tried too hard. So I tried again immediately after, and I am very happy with it (my 3rd attempt). Found it really hard to simplify and keep it just to C, S, and I lines, but I eventually found a flow that worked.
Awesome work! I see an improvement from your first attempt to the third one. Your lines are way more confident.
Kelly
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6mo
Both are pre-demo.
I found the C curve to be kind of tough to do.
I also found myself doing very long, straight lines, and I don't know if that is okay.
But alas, it was an enjoyable and challenging project to do. I will do it again!
Kelly
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6mo
The first two are pears 1 and 2 compared to the pre-critique and demo picture
The things I fixed:
made cleaner lines
got rid of the outline
fixed the proportions a bit
The problem I ran into was keeping the same light values for the light mid-tones. Some marks seemed darker the more I drew, so I need more practice on that.
Also, I may have made the light mid-tones too light since, looking at the picture, I can barely make out the highlights.
I am open to critiques, so if there are other things I missed, please let me know!