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Hans Heide Nørløv
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3d
added comment inProject - How to Draw Above and Below Eye Level
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I did these not quite following the rules about the timer 😬.
I instead focused on noticing carefully when I made mistakes, and then I would try to figure that problem out.
but I also did some of them following the time.
I hope my questions about the rotated carpet makes sense…
I’m glad to know that I can trust that Marshall will clear up any problems I’m having with rotating objects later in the course!
C B
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6d
I have drawn so many anvils. Many didn't get seen through to the end because they became lost causes, but here are two I saw through.
The one facing away... It might have been a problem with my measurements, maybe it really is that foreshortened, but the horn is barely visible. I could cheat it by elongating my cube and adding it in...
the same thing happened for me where the horn got absolutely squished. i must also add, that i for some reason find the first drawing very appealing to look at!
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8d
I think you have a good mix of CSI lines in here! Great use of tapered lines as well.
Daniel
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10d
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I'm doing everything digitally to get used to drawing on a tablet but emulated pencil paper. I didn't know I could use guidelines until I watched the demo, so the proportions could be better. Feel free to give me some feedback!
I Think you should consider using a brush that is more sensitive to pressure in terms on making you able to make strokes thick and thin, and change the value. (This wasn’t the point in this exercise, but for later exercises I would recommend to use a soft physical pencil, or get something similar on digital)
@ambitious_loserz
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12d
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This is the best I could do lol. I had trouble being able to tell the where to put the 3 value of shadows because I had trouble seeing the difference between a shadow and a color difference on the pear.
Hopefully I’ll get better though lmao
ah, so you're saying that it was hard to tell if 2 different areas were different because of the hue of the color, or because of a difference in values? i think it could be valuable for you to simply put the foto in greyscale, an analyse where the values are different and vere it was just the hues playing a trick.
Rachel Truesdell
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10d
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Hey everyone! I am excited to be a part of this community and learn along side you all :) Here is my first assignment. Please let me know if you have any critiques- I think I struggled with the mid-tones and blended too much!
i think in terms of proportions and even values you did quite well. i do think as you pointed out that you forgot to separate the values clearly. remember Stan said that we had to use straight lines only and only use 5 values.
Seth Szymanski
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9d
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Beginner beginner here with my level one work. I did an outline with a 2H, but I did all my shading with a 2B as an artist friend encouraged me to stick with a pencil and learn how to use different pressures to get my tones. I think my tones could be more defined though maybe? If anyone has suggestions on how to do that better I'd love to hear it or any other critiques you'd be kind enough to share.
i hope the foto reply makes sense. i can see that any problem that you're having here, will be taught later in the course!
Hans Heide Nørløv
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8d
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I think I should probably have focused more on the proportions in the portrait.
if anyone has a critique I would like to hear it! 👍
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8d
I think your portrait looks excellent! Those aren't the model's proportions, but in terms of the assignment it's perfect. I personally think it has great style. The pears are well done also. On the second pear you used a darker value for the bruising on the pear; you just want to focus on the plane changes for this exercise. Even though it is a darker value than the rest of the skin of the pear, there's no need to include it. It's a detail that isn't important to the structure of the pear, which is what we are trying to capture here. Overall, very nice work 👍
Hans Heide Nørløv
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9d
Does it make sense what I’m trying to do?
can anyone tell me if it looks correct, I feel that it might be off, but that could have something to do with how I drew the curves, or is it in the way I connected to corners?
It looks correct to me. it is just a sharper twist than what was drawn on the example video. but you are on the right track.
Mattia Ferrari
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25d
Plss give me some critiques, im
17 year old and i dream of becoming an animator. Thats
Very gestural! The quad might be a but boring shape, I think that you could make it more interesting to match the rest
