Hey Pedro, I think what will help you is if you use more gesture in your drawings, it will help it not look so stiff. Remember when we draw we are telling a story, and we do that with the pose. I did some alternative poses to show you what I mean. I hope they help :)

Mark crilley's YouTube channel should help out with improving manga style drawings.

Hi @Pedro Henrique D'Oliveira your drawings are a good starting point for the further development. I like how you are doing the hair. The girls eyes are in the wrong position for me, her right eye is too deep. I tried to correct it with a simple transformation on the computer to show my point. How are you constructing your heads?

Even though your style choice is manga, it really doesn't hurt to go through Proko's figure drawing and portrait drawing classes to get the fundamentals. The face and body structure is the same, it's just more simplified in Manga. For quick fixes on your current upload, I think your tendency is to draw eyes too close to each other. Both in realistic and manga or comic book style, the distance between two eyes is usually at least one eye apart. Manga tends to exaggerate that as well to achieve a youthful look. And when the person doesn't face the camera, like in your first drawing, the eye that's farther away from us should be shorter.

I would say that the head is a bit off proportions even if it is in "anime" style but great work nonetheless. If you're new to digital I would suggest to practice drawing without zooming in your canvas and treat it as a physical paper so you always see everything rather than focusing on every detail. only zoom in when you want to render details which I've learned the hard way and its really hard to unlearn when you do it for a long time. Always use reference, always squint, and keep on drawing!

Hey Pedro, I like your archer character. I think though it's suffering from being stiff. I did some drawings to show you how you can add more gesture to your poses. It's important to build our characters on top of a good flowing gesture so that they dont look stiff. I hope this helps, keep drawing :)

Nice work! I think the gesture and flow in this character is a bit stiff. The anatomy I think is mostly there although some parts sit a bit oddly to me. I think the collar bones are a bit too low and the way the breasts connect to the armpit is too high. I might suggest watching the Proko lesson on how to draw breasts. I think you might suffer from the same problem as me when I draw things on angles that aren't straight on - I tend to straighten the object. For your base, I might actually suggest drawing the nipples on to remind you which way the chest is pointing. The breast on her left hand side looks like it's rotated forward where I think it should be more angled to face her right. Her left leg also looks a little off to me - I think it might be something about the knee but I''m not 100% sure. I would probably suggest posing in a mirror to try check it. A fair chunk of these flaws are covered when you add clothing, especially the full black outfit. I hope you find this critique useful - feel free to ignore it if not.