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MeanMachineRex
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1yr
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You did a good job on the first two but you could darken the value to make them pop, however, you did a great job on Jinx, that's the value you should aim for. John Snow's anatomy can be improved to better structure his face and his hair can be simplified.
Javi Lozano
1yr
Thanks a lot for the feedback! I really appreciate it. i have one question though - what if I want to go for a lighter style? I agree that the first two could pop more, but I also like the light feeling that they have. I guess all will come down to the shading techniques (subject I haven't studied yet), right? Just wondering if there is a way to make them feel more complete and interesting without going as dark as I did with Jinx.
MeanMachineRex
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1yr
The shapes are good, darken the value of shadows to solidify the form, some cast shadows seem missing.
I noticed the missing shadows right after I had posted haha. But for the darken value should it be everywhere?
