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@romero505
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added comment inCritique - Value Scales
Hello guys, could you give feedback on my practice??????? I love you guys xoxox
@leolopyz
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for feedback on something like value scales pictures have to be taken with better lighting.. the upper left side of your pages is lit up while the bottom right is in shadow affecting all of your work on the page
@leolopyz
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4mo
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some poses I did, about 4 min each I think right now the biggest thing for me is to improve proportions, I tend to make the lower body too short
I can’t critique as im so far below your level . But can i say you give me hope , i too have problems with proportions . Your poses feel alive to me 👌
@leolopyz
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4mo
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Only had this notebook with me, last two drawings are from imagination. I’m going to finish all 40 but wanted to quickly show some progress
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4mo
Looking good, keep it up!
@leolopyz
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4mo
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Quick attempt before I go to sleep, I’ll definitely do another tomorrow morning. For this attempt I should taken more time for the big initial shapes because I ended up working with a badly oriented head..
@leolopyz
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4mo
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Did some more animals, the tiger was a lot harder I felt that there were not nearly as many big obvious shapes when compared to the other animals
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4mo
Looks awesome! Really nice work. It makes sense that you had a more difficult time with the tiger -- there aren't very well defined, closed shapes like you were able to make with the rest of the animals. You may have to invent some shapes that aren't as obvious. If you feel like doing a few more iterations, see if you can come up with some interesting shapes to represent the anatomy.
@leolopyz
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4mo
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Any critique appreciated (:
im definitely going to do more of these but for now here’s what I’ve done
Great job getting your work up here. Part of mastering ones craft is considering presentation and orientation of your work. I would love to see your images in landscape.
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4mo
Looking good! Your lines are more controlled and less hairy in your rooster drawing. Keep striving for that line quality. Looking forward to seeing your other drawings :)
@leolopyz
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4mo
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honestly it kind of looks like shit, but at least I did the assignment and I’m gonna do it again to improve (:
ref Jeff watts
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4mo
Everyone makes drawings that they aren't proud of. You learn from it, and you move on. You have the right idea. Keep it up :)
It can definitely be discouraging when your drawings don’t look the way you want them to, but keep it up. Your lines are really expressive. Nice and flowing, which I think is taking after the artist well.
