Hi Becca! Thanks for sharing. It looks like you are doing great but I will throw some comments your way so we can all grow together. Currently I feel that more tones could be added to the image as everything seems to be treated the same. To me there seems to be a light, a midtone and a dark. Increasing this to a minimal of 6 or even 9 tones would help out. Some of the hatching seems to be rather straight and seems to flatten the image. Having more of the lines follow the contours of the form would help define the structure.