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Hello! I am interested in critiques on this gesture/structure drawing I did without much anatomy focus. I spent about an hour trying to get this pose right but I still feel like something’s off, I’ve always struggled with back poses. I think the main issue is in the butt and legs area or maybe the oblique. Any critiques are appreciated. I can also send the reference pic as a DM if that would be helpful! Thank you all so much!
Dwight
2yr
Hello, just my initial feeling, but I think the ribcage is too high. The distance between the bottom of the ribs and the pelvis is usually a fist length, which in yours seems like 1.5 - 2 fists. I have not studied butts or legs so will not comment about them. I've attached my attempt.
Julip
Hi Anfissa! It looks like these are notes from videos, I would recommend that instead of taking notes watch the video multiple times and practice each part of the video once at a time. For instance watch the whole video once, then go through and for each topic draw a page just looking into that topic. This will allow you to figure out each topic for yourself rather than having to go back and read through notes each time you want to draw. Notes are helpful but I think practice is key.
Julip
Wow I love the way their left foot is turned toward the viewer!
Matthew Manghi
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