Jo Edgehill
Somewhere in space
Just a little artist with a big dream :)
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Jo Edgehill
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2yr
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Just some drawings :)Hi! I've been so busy lately that I forgot I even had this app haha. Sorry to anyone who commented on my last post ,I completely forgot to check my notifications. Here's a few new drawings for my book \web comic \ work in progress . Still not sure where that's going. Feel free to give me feedback , I promise I'll answer back this time.
Crystal Blue (she/her)
•
3yr
They look very good! What you could try doing is drawing the sides of the box that are facing away from the 'camera'. That way it would be easier to visualize where the spine connects to each block.
Crystal Blue (she/her)
•
3yr
Hello! Also in high school and self taught, I’ll leave the advice to ppl more qualified than me but I really like the atmosphere in your last drawing with all the purple
Thank you! :) Us teenagers need to stick together haha! But again , thank you :) It's good to hear your opinion.
Hi! This is my first landscape piece in a while ,so I'm nervous to post this . This is a landscape from my graphic novel project ,which is still a work in progress. Please tell me if you see anything I could do to make it better..thanks! :)
Hi! I don't have a drawing this time ,but a question about drawing monitors. I was looking to get one for under $500 , and these are the two options I picked. Does anyone have any experience with either of these monitors ? I have windows 10 ,by the way. Thank you! :)
Hello! This is a redraw of my first post here,because I wanted to see how much I improved since then.I was originally critiqued by Steve Lenze ,and I hope I did a better job this time! Please let me know if you see anything that could be improved. Thank you! :)
Steve Lenze
•
3yr
Hey Jo,
Good to see some work from you. I will tell you right off the bat how pleased I am at how your using wrinkles to show perspective and anatomy. you are also rounding the edges of the sleeves and pant cuffs to show perspective. I struggle to find anything major to critique you on... well, I think we would see some of the left foot peak out behind the right leg, and the fingers would probably be longer, but that's about all. Nice work.
I will say the background does look like an after thought, but we can talk about that when you do a background you planned out.
Thank you so much , Mr. Lenze!! That's very encouraging to hear from you :) I hope that the next time I have a planned background I can get your critique of it. Thank you again! :)
I've been missing because of school and work ,but I'm back with an illustration I'd like some opinions on. This is Austin McQuartlin ,the protagonist of a graphic novel I'm working on. At first It was just character practice ,but I decided to add the background later on. Any feedback is appreciated.. thank you! :)
Ruth Salmun
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3yr
I know this is coming late, but I hope it helps. Thus far if you learned this all on your own, you are already doing a great job. What you need to improve is focusing on foundation, following the proper curriculum. I suggest starting with sketching and perspective, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5orI-eYOPys&list=PLMXbAPr21di8DjTKCE3EoS4KFtNZ-FDnP this is a free online perspective course that can give you a great start with foundational stuff. It is boring but worth the time. With sketching, peter than dynamic sketching is a great resource.
I'm so sorry I didn't see your reply! I appreciate your opinion, and will definitely check out the link you gave me. Thank you so much! :)
