Critique please :)
3yr
Jo Edgehill
I've been missing because of school and work ,but I'm back with an illustration I'd like some opinions on. This is Austin McQuartlin ,the protagonist of a graphic novel I'm working on. At first It was just character practice ,but I decided to add the background later on. Any feedback is appreciated.. thank you! :)
Hey Jo,
Good to see some work from you. I will tell you right off the bat how pleased I am at how your using wrinkles to show perspective and anatomy. you are also rounding the edges of the sleeves and pant cuffs to show perspective. I struggle to find anything major to critique you on... well, I think we would see some of the left foot peak out behind the right leg, and the fingers would probably be longer, but that's about all. Nice work.
I will say the background does look like an after thought, but we can talk about that when you do a background you planned out.
Thank you so much , Mr. Lenze!! That's very encouraging to hear from you :) I hope that the next time I have a planned background I can get your critique of it. Thank you again! :)
