this is my second attempt

Hello, I was wondering if i should completely finish and master the line segment of the course before moving onto shapes. Or should i bounce between the two?

I feel like some of the proportions were off, I would appreciate it if anyone could critique

Those shoelaces were a nightmare.

The one on the right is after the video. I struggled the most with the darker halftone, I kept making it the same shade as the the lighter shadow. It might be because I am only using one pencil.