I re-did my pear after watching this video.

Second attempt after the critique video :)

First attempts! I haven’t used actual drawing pencils in a long time, and I started shading the shadows on the pear with the H pencil I’d been sketching the outline with, and even though I shaded fairly lightly, it didn’t play nice when I tried to go over it with my 2B. Lesson learned! I used the 3rd reference photo of the pear.