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Jim H
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4mo
added comment inProject - Simplify from Observation
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I had to take this at a funny angle because the light was shining off of the graphite. I already sense that my hands are remembering how to draw a bit.. and I am remembering how to see shapes. My ability to lay down accurate tone is still a bit wiggly as well as my proportions.
These are good basic exercises that I was never taught in school. :(
@darkart
4mo
I guess the only issue I see is a bit of a lack of simplification of the values like a bit of highlights where there shouldn't be any. But idk I'm new to drawing.
Overall, you did a good job simplifying the shapes but the eye proportion is a bit off. Just keep in mind next time that the eyes follow a relatively straight line. But at the same time I'm still new to this too lol so you might not want to trust me. But still great job!
@darkart
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4mo
Asked for help
Tried without the demo..didn't turn out well...Tried again with the demo turned out okay I guess. I would like criticism of what I can improve.
@darkart
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9mo
Tried I just decided to make adjustments according to the demo on the same one forgot to take a pic before I did that. I would like some feedback please.
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9mo
The only critique I could give you is a slight one. I think the values of the pear could be separated from the background more.
It’s good as it is too. You did exactly what you needed to for this project. Nice work!
