Overall, you did a good job simplifying the shapes but the eye proportion is a bit off. Just keep in mind next time that the eyes follow a relatively straight line. But at the same time I'm still new to this too lol so you might not want to trust me. But still great job!

Great first attempt! Try to avoid outlining the highlight value with a dark line -- challenge yourself to make the edges of your darker value super sharp to separate the highlight instead.