I tried this one - the leg looks somewhat odd in my drawing as well. Plus the body is too flat in mine - I’ve corrected this in the second image.

Your drawing has so much character. He's saying "well now I don't feel like it!"

I want to take a moment to thank you @Stan Prokopenko. We are only at the beginning of this course and i have already learned a lot. In the csi critique you saw the messy shoes i drew. My lines were all over the place because i was pretty much just guessing and afterwards seeing if it looked good. The idea of actively DESIGNING the shapes and lines when drawing from observation instead of just trying to mimik whats in front of you helped me a lot.

Cool - like it very much. You’ve made the pose even a bit more dynamic.