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Matt
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7mo
added comment inProject - Simplify from Observation
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Here is my pre-demo attempt. Feedback is welcome, thank you!
Jordan Ferretti
7mo
I like the personality coming through in the shadow shapes.
Jordan Ferretti
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7mo
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I'm excited by how much I learned just doing this first assignment twice! The second drawing was after watching the demo and critique videos. I feel like I improved the shape design, but still struggled with understanding and expressing the shapes of reflected light in the shadows. Pencil control and grouping values into light/shadow families improved a bit more on the second drawing as well. Any feedback is welcome.
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7mo
Lovely drawings! You have an intuitive understanding of value and you made some great choices here. Your shapes are good and simple. The only thing I could really say here is that the shape of your light value next to the core shadow may be a bit too simplified. I feel that it takes away from the 3D effect that you achieve in other areas. Just a small thing though, overall I can tell you really understood the assignment. Nice work :)
