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@aheneha
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2yr
added comment inProcreate painting
This is beautiful :) as for corrections, I think it you should use some harder edges in your work. Marco Bucci has an amazing video on it.
Real Jr
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2yr
I loved the art as a whole, I can visualize emotions in it, even though it is very good, as your request was for criticism, the only thing that caught my attention was the face, looking at the region of the nose, because according to the angle of the head I believe you could have projected it slightly more out of the edge of the face, if only a little, because as in the part of the body the fabric of the clothes brings a lot of movement, I get this feeling of a straighter face when I look exclusively at him, but this may have been on purpose. I hope I had the ability to help in some way, your drawing was amazing 🙂
@kemon
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2yr
looks beautiful. What do you think is wrong?
If I wanted to nit pick, which I don't really, I would say the lighting is a bit inconsistent but its a quick sketch if I were you I wouldn't worry about that at all.
An approx 1 hr practice....
What is going wrong in this?
Can you please help me !!
Steve Lenze
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2yr
Hey RItesh,
The one thing that you need to do is to stop using black to darken a color, this makes the colors look dead.
Instead, you need to color shift and use either cool or warm colors in your shadows. Also, the hair looks kind of flat because there are no highlights.
I did a quick paint over to show you what I'm talking about, I hope it helps :)
Did this painting yesterday
Took me around 1 and half an hr to complete it...
Please let me know any flaus you find in it...
Steve Lenze
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2yr
This is really nice! The only thing I noticed is the far nostril is missing and there needs to be a darker shadow behind the ear to help pop it forward more. Other than that, I really like it, especially your subtle rendering. Nice work :)
RItesh Dhande
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2yr
Such a good combination of colors, loved it, Its not perfect ofcourse, but is pretty good... For now you can try to paint or atleast draw outine of individaul parts like face, hand and back understanding the anatomy and in full detail with lines to guide proportions and perspectice... also finding some reference to draw it again, and you will know where you went wrong by yourself....
Did this portrait yesterday
Took me around 1 and half an hr to complete it...
Please let me know any flaus you find in it...
Asked for help
Hello there! I have been having a lot of fun doing the hand assignments. I would really appreciate it if you guys provide me with some helpful critiques. The problem that bothered me the most was the placement of wrinkles in the right place in order to exaggerate the gesture. I would love to hear your tips on that as well. I also tried adding color after doing the shading. Thank you and have a wonderful day ahead!