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BEN LEE
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3yr
added comment inHelp/Critique with Likeness, Shading
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Hey Guys. This is a full graphite portrait. I feel like I managed to get the likeness pretty well in the block in (after several attempts!) but then lost it a bit in the final render. The strange thing was that after doing a much more complete drawing, but before going to full render, I traced the photo and overlayed it on my drawing and everything matched up almost perfectly, so the differences were, at that point, extremely subtle. I unfortunately didn't take a picture of that part. Any thoughts on how and why I went off track would be really appreciated.
I was using Tombow Mono 100 Pencils (4H - 2B) on Canson Mi Tientes paper if anyone is interested. This was a birthday present for a friend.
BEN LEE
3yr
Any general feedback on composition and general artistry would also be greatly appreciated
Yu Hsien Hsu
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4yr
Asked for help
Please give me your advice.
I take the photo of my hand and then use the grid system to measure the accurate shape.
Critique is appreciated!
Hey. First off this is great. The shading is really beautifully done. I agree with Renaldi Bemba about there being room to push the values further but that's definitely a matter of choice and style. For useful critique I would say the gesture is perhaps a little stiff and I think the grid system is partly to blame there. While it's great for getting an accurate representation I think there's a trade off in interpretation. I think this is particularly evident in the thumb. Without the grid system you are forced to make decisions that ultimately lead to your own artistic expression coming through. That being said, this is still a really wonderful piece. Thanks for sharing
Gabriel Kahn
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4yr
Hey David! Amazing work! @Stephen Bauman 's artwork heavily utilize core shadows, I think you should focus on that a bit more. Core shadows are usually the darkest shadows on the form and they are right on the border between the light and shadow. Similarly to the ambient occlusion, no reflected lights travel there.