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Stefan Lintl
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3yr
added comment inProko Challenge Stylized Self-Portraits - FINAL SUBMISSIONS HERE
Maybe the reflexion of my inside...
Arshvir Sekhon
3yr
Maybe too stylized lol
hey is my submission of self portrait my oil painting, "In My Reflection"
Nice reflection effect. The only thing I would recommend is to establish a horizon line, a plane, color or just as simple as a value difference in the background that separates your actual face and your reflection. Because right now I am having a hard time imagining where the surface that is reflecting your face is located as there is no other reference point for me to use.
Done using wax or conte crayons, honestly not sure. A bit of the perspective problems thoe...
Really like the shading and the use of crosshatching to describe the shape of the face.
My first ever self-portrait. Traditional A5 Watercolor.
Would love some criticism. Duo-color.(red and blue)
I don't know if its only me but when I clicked on your portrait to see it in the expanded view. The picture was very pixilated and blurry. Try reuploading your picture and see if it improves the quality.
Here's my self portrait created on procreate, this is my current style would love to get a critique on it :D
Really like the style. Try cropping the bottom of your picture where its just black or painting more so that it fills the empty space at the bottom. In my opinion it will make your portrait more grounded and will get rid of the illusion where your upper torso in floating in the air. The second thing I would recommend is to add some more value to the face. Like you did for the neck and sides of the face. Specially around the nose, eyes and the lips. Your face is the only place which seems flat compare to the rest of painting. What I mean by flat it that it is lacking three dimensional aspect to it. If this is part of your style then please ignore this part. I hope I was of help.
Here's me. Would love critique. Digital, done in clip studio.
Great job with the lighting and blocked shading. The only thing I would recommend would be to experiment with the background. Right now the value of your background is quite similar to some of the tones in your portrait. Try going with a darker background, vignetting or some kind of texture that separates your foreground from your background and make your portrait pop.