Still life Sunday’s
5mo

@toph
I’m doing a challenge to get better at still lives, so I welcome anyone who wants to improve to join me!
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4mo
This is a really nice still life painting! The details and textures are so good!
I think that your values look really good, but that apple in the front is drawing too much attention and some parts look a bit cluttered. You can fix this by just choosing a few areas to have the full range of values. It’s ok to let some details fall into shadow.
Great stuff! Keep it up!
Asked for help
If anyone wants to critique this still life, that would be much appreciated!
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5mo
Beautiful! The pot with the steam is especially great. I like the variety in edges.
Your still life is artfully made. The only thing I would change would be minor.
If you darken the value of the wooden plate, it will separate the spoon from the pear and make it easier to read.
That is all.
Keep it up!
This is great.