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SNAIL CRITIQUE
11mo
Anderson
Hey guys, could you please critique my drawing? Now I am practicing lines with CSI method. Let me know what you guys think. Feel free to comment anything about it :)
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Patrick Bosworth
Hey @andy29! Nice job on this assignment! You kept your CSI lines simple and clean, there's some really nice fluidity to the gesture of the snail body, and you got pretty close on the body proportions! You mentioned you noticed the proportion of the shell being too tall which was the first thing that jumped out to me as well. While you're at this stage of the drawing it helps to look at the drawing in a mirror, or take a photo of your work and flip the image so you can see it with fresh eyes and make corrections. A lot of your proportion, placement, or measuring errors will stick out when you mirror your image and study it for a moment while doing a lay in. Here's an overlay so you can see where you were close to the proportions of the snail body, and where the shell is off. Stan covers a lot about measuring and checking proportions in the next section of basics. Hope this helps! Keep up the good work!
Anderson
11mo
Thanks for the critic. It means a lot. I will improve myself to get better with the proportions. Thanks again
Anderson
11mo
I did notice that I made the first layer of the shell to big, so I will fix that!
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