Robo bean critique
2mo
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@cchapman3
need feedback
2mo
You are pretty close with this one. The torso looks good, but the pelvis is too complicated of a shape. Try to keep it as a simple box, it will be easier. I like how you were not fooled by the shoulders because they are able to move independent of the ribcage. Keep at it :)
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@cchapman3
2mo
Believe me Steve, it wasn’t easy, the shoulders are what kept me on this pose for a month. Honesty I’ve never drawn a pose where the shoulders tilt like this so I feel like was fooled by them since I didn’t draw the ribcage independent from them like yours. There are other things I see how I did wrong as well so I will draw all my figures as simple boxes moving forward as that’ll make things a lot easier! Thanks as always!
2mo
Asked for help
Still been working on the Robo bean, and while I’ve gotten better understanding, this pose is in general was tough b/c of how the shoulders tilt and foreshortening, can someone lemme know if I did it right, thanks