Please give me feedback
1mo
Anubhav Saini
Hello everyone in the following piece can y'all give me your feedback on hand
*Proportions
*Structure
*Gesture
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17d
Hey, @Anubhav Saini! Long time! :)
Overall, I think this is an intriguing and interesting drawing! Since it's an imaginative piece, you can rest assured that it's okay being more loose with proportions. I also think you've captured a good expression for the hand, so I don't see any issues to address about gesture.
Now I do see a structural aspect that could be brought to attention: by looking at the drawing, I feel as if the telephone doesn't quite conform to what should be the volume of the hand, so I'd suggest making a few adjustments in its position considering the roundness and thickness of the back of the palm where it's standing. Here's a draw-over to illustrate what I mean.
Hope this helps!
And hope everything's fine with you.
Keep it up!