Need feedback on scene painting
3yr
Kevin Labaziewicz
At the Worlds End (14 x 17) in, Gouache on Paper, 2020
Hello!
This is my first large-scale gouache painting. I'd like to hear about the composition, lighting, and dynamism of the piece. Feedback on that would be really helpful.
Much thanks
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3yr
Hey @Kevin Labaziewicz!
Overall, I’m loving the composition, especially the variety in shapes and gestures of the figures on the bottom. I think they’re making an interesting contrast with the mass of characters and landscape on top!
Have you finished this piece already? If not, I’m wondering how far are you into the development. Do you plan on rendering it any further? Is there anything else you haven’t worked or added yet?
It's a completed piece. Although, I think the left side of the painting needs to be worked on. Maybe I'll go back and really define the shadow and light shapes on that side. I'm glad you like it!
Great job on rendering that rock on the right! It could use some more detail and definition especially in the 2 characters in the middle? Think the lighting is great.
