Hey Gaylon, Nice work on the sketchbook. One of the things I noticed is that you need to add some structure to your drawings. I did a quick sketch of one of your drawings to show you how adding structure can help your drawings feel more solid. I hope it helps :)

Very creative. I like your spooky characters. I noticed a few pages where you drew people in a pose where the underside of the chin is showing significantly, which is a very difficult pose to draw. Here are a few Proko tutorials that could help you: Loomis Head: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1EPNYWeEf1U&list=PL39135B8D190B7C97 Draw a Head from an Extreme Angle: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PgK90TpV5fA&list=PL39135B8D190B7C97&index=4 The Loomis method is a very simple + easy way to draw a head from imagination. Use that method to help you lay in the the features in more extreme poses. Hope that helps :) Cool sketchbook, keep it up!