Memory dooodles
4yr
RItesh Dhande
I did it by memory, no reference...
Just doodling...
What is going wrong with this?
It looks really good for drawing with no ref! I'd say start flipping your canvas more, make a keyboard shortcut for it and then you'll see any proportional mistakes a lot easier
Hey Rltesh,
You chose a pretty tough angle for a no reference drawing. Your not that far off, and I think you would benefit from using the Loomis head as a starting point. I did a draw over of your head and applied the Loomis head over it. Then I did a drawing of your head as it would look with the revisions. I hope this is helpful, keep drawing :)
I'd say that the main issue is that the facial features aren't pointing in a consistent direction. With the eyes, nose, ear, and forehead, they're telling me that the woman is looking up. With the chin and jaw, though, it's telling me that she's looking forward in three-quarters view. With these photos you can tell that when they're looking up a line from the chin to the corner of the jaw would be nearly horizontal. If she's looking up enough you may even see part of the bottom plane of the chin. The other photo I have in three-quarters view is closer to the angle you have for the jaw.