Mannequinization Critiques
3yr
James Paris
Hey everyone ! Here are my latest attempts at Mannequinization of the body !
I come to you, once again, to ask for advice !
Where do you think i can improve ?
I know a have a tendency to over-complicate things (The first picture (Yoni29) is a proof of that, i got a little carried away with muscles) but i tried to get back to simple shapes afterwhile (Pic 6)
I still struggle with the space between the ribcage and the pelvis (I think i spread them too far from each other (Pic 7))
And overall, I struggle with the angle of the pelvis on some of the poses.
Anyway, do you guys have any advice on those problems, or do you see anything else that needs fixing ?
Thank you all !
( Again sorry for the pics quality, i'll try to scan them next time ! )
Hey James,
These look very 3D which is good, but I think you need to think about perspective more. I took your first drawing and did a draw over to show you what I mean. I don't have the original reference, but I interpreted your drawing, I hope it helps.
I think your doing pretty good so keep up the good work :)
Hi !
Thank you for your advice !
About perspective, i started a while back the Drawabox program, but I took a little break from it ( 250 boxes is a lot haha ! )
I will work on perspective, and i guess completing those boxes can help too !
Ps : Here is the reference photo, I wasn't sure if i could share paid content here
Looking at it now ( it was one of my firsts tries ) I see that in the reference, the model is way more leaned than what I drew.
