I'd love some critique.
2yr
Jan D.
The Raven by Edgar Allan Poe. Feels meh really idk. what do you think about it?
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Steve Lenze
Hey Jan, I really like the background for this, it has a lot of mood. I guess my biggest note would be that all the compositional elements are all pushed down into the lower left corner. Were you going to put a title at the top? Also, I would add some acting to the character to make him more interesting. Use the pose, or body language, to show emotion. I did a quick diagram to show you what I mean, I hope it helps :)
Jan D.
2yr
thanks Steve. i was kinda fighting with myself between cropping the top of the painting off and leaving it. the pose sure does seem stiff:p thanks anyway!:)
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