Gesture how to improve
4yr
Rénaldi Bemba
Hello guys just to have some feedback about my gesture ...really want to improve tell me what you think about it ?
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Yiming Wu
4yr
These are already so nicely done! If I must say one thing about how to improve... I think you may introduce more "twist" to the volume. For example look at the legs in image 2 and 3, and the waist/bottom area in image 5, they may appear stiff, you can introduce *some* twist to them so it's more energetic. Now they look they could use a little bit more "strength" if that makes sense :D Still very good gestures... I'm in awe, couldn't do this myself XD.
Dan B
4yr
You've got nice strong lines there and they're definitely gestural, but a bit mixed with structure as well making them 'bumpy.' I would try simplifying it a bit more first and then build the structure on top to refine the drawing (if that's what you're going for). I've done a quick paint-over to show what I mean. Then you can measure proportions etc from here before adding detail.
Rénaldi Bemba
Thanks you very much ... So I should simplified more my lines ok really helpful I will try today your advice !!!
Felix Oesinghaus
There is definitely a lot of character here, which is great. The proportions are a bit cartoonish, you tend to make the legs too short and and feet too big. Also you tend to exaggerate every curve rather than just the curve of the pose/spine. I'm sure not all of the female models had bulging biceps like this so don't be afraid to throw in more straight lines!
Rénaldi Bemba
Thanks
Shaurya Jhaldiyal
Hi Renaldi, Your gestures have a lot of charaacter to them! What I believe you can improve upon are lines. I see a lot of sharp lines with are adding that character to your drawings but you need to balance them out with some slow sweeping lines. If you find a line to be somewhat straight don't try and give it a curve rather make it more straight, try and amplify the function of the line. I also feel the proportions are a bit off so keep a look out for negative shapes and overall proportions of the figure. Anyway these are great drawings and seem pretty animated, which is always a good sign!
Rénaldi Bemba
Thanks you
Kyrie Escala
very nice drawings :) but I think you got caught up in drawing each details and makes the figures look stiff, I think if your studying gesture you should focus on the overall flow of the pose, try to use more simple shapes. hope that helps :)
Rénaldi Bemba
Thanks you
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