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3yr
Jacob
Hey guys, how would you improve it?
@Jan D. @C @blockhead Thank You for feedback! I decided to simplify the background and remove excessive vfx. Think it serves the purpose as a character design piece much better now. I'll keep in mind Your advices with my next artwork as I'm happy with this one as it is right now :)
Thanks again and have a great week!
Hey there Jacob.
Nice drawing here. I like that this actually feels like he's in a cold place. Honestly I might just push the shadow values a little bit more to the dark side. His shadow indicates a stronger light source in front of him.
Other than that, this is neat :)
I would agree with @Jan D. . Nice drawing and details on the clothing, colours are nice and proportions seem good to me. So a good job on the drawing but I think - yeah - the background detracts a little bit for me as it is very stiff with the straight horizon line running through the image.
There's two things I think you could do with the background - either try to add more details and create a simple scene or the drawing could also work nicely on a plain / single colour background, I think. :)
Hi Jacob. I really like it, especially the drawing and the colours!:) You could probably work on the background a little more. A hint of some terrain in the background maybe? Make the shadow a little softer?
Also it kind of looks like it's missing ani aliasing when I zoom in. Did you use the photoshop pencil (or per or whatever) tool? Think it can have that effect. Just a detail tho.
Great job!:)