Yoshi Oda
Earth
Inspiring illustrator. I want to be a comic artist and/or a concept artist
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Yoshi Oda
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CritiqueI’m not really sure which category im supposed to post this but I’m just posting it here since it’s seems like it would be best. I’m still kinda new to the proko thing and haven’t been active as much and I was wondering, which category or where do we post our work that we want general critique on?
For this piece, I’m trying to go for a manga/comic like art style and I’m trying to improve on ink wash since it’s the medium I’ll be using.
Yoshi Oda
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29d
Asked for help
1. (Artist not in order). zhang.bread_art, Masashi Kishimoto, flo.creates.rt, kazuki_oekaki, and brycekhodraws. One that I didn't show but wanted to was Studio trigger. I didn’t show them because I can’t specify by one show/image because it’s several projects that have good perspectives in them.
2. I want to draw very exaggerated fights and be able to draw several things in areas. I also want to get better at drawing settings since I’m only good at drawing what I see and I can’t make up a place (if that makes sense)
Yoshi Oda
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1mo
Asked for help
I think I made the eyes too big but I don’t think that’s the only problem. I think I made the overall head to small and the features a bit to big/bold if that makes sense? I would like some feedback so I can improve in the future
Yoshi Oda
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1mo
The one I did feels a bit off. It feels like a different hair style than the one in the demo but don’t know why.
Kiki K.
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3yr
I did my first assignment following Proko’s lesson and then I tried one on my own. Any feedback is appreciated. Tia
i think the back of the head might be a bit to long for the second image (I know I’m really late to this post).
Yoshi Oda
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2mo
I think the one I did when i following along was ok but when I tried to apply it into practice. They started to look weird and I was hoping to get some feedback because I don’t know what I need to change/improve
Yoshi Oda
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2mo
I think I just need to work on the hair more. I was never really good at drawing hair to begin with but I still wanted feedback on how I can improve.
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2mo
Looking good! You have some solid construction that already gives a good impression of 3-dimensionality. The thing I'd recommend is rounding out the edge furthest from the viewer, as that slight curve better fits the perspective of the rest of the features. With the side of his head visible, and the eyes/nose/mouth facing left, the side of his head furthest away will look smaller as it turns away.
