Yoshi Oda
Earth
Inspiring illustrator. I want to be a comic artist and/or a concept artist
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Yoshi Oda
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8d
added comment inDrawing ‘Nicolai’
Asked for help
I think I made the eyes too big but I don’t think that’s the only problem. I think I made the overall head to small and the features a bit to big/bold if that makes sense? I would like some feedback so I can improve in the future
Yoshi Oda
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9d
The one I did feels a bit off. It feels like a different hair style than the one in the demo but don’t know why.
Kiki K.
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3yr
I did my first assignment following Proko’s lesson and then I tried one on my own. Any feedback is appreciated. Tia
i think the back of the head might be a bit to long for the second image (I know I’m really late to this post).
Yoshi Oda
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26d
I think the one I did when i following along was ok but when I tried to apply it into practice. They started to look weird and I was hoping to get some feedback because I don’t know what I need to change/improve
Yoshi Oda
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1mo
I think I just need to work on the hair more. I was never really good at drawing hair to begin with but I still wanted feedback on how I can improve.
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27d
Looking good! You have some solid construction that already gives a good impression of 3-dimensionality. The thing I'd recommend is rounding out the edge furthest from the viewer, as that slight curve better fits the perspective of the rest of the features. With the side of his head visible, and the eyes/nose/mouth facing left, the side of his head furthest away will look smaller as it turns away.
