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@theealtarboy
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added comment inProject - Simplify from Observation
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Hello! I'm new to this Drawing Basics course and I just finished my first assignment! Would love critique and advice. I did two attempts. Which one is closer? Any improvements?
Bennett Jimenez
2d
Great job near the stem area on the right attempt!
Dani Torres
2d
I would darken the shadows (at least on the pear) a bit more for more contrast, but otherwise it's pretty good! :D
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2d
Hey there! Welcome :) Your shapes look great, I think you really nailed it. In terms of values, I think the shadow areas could be darkened a bit. That will expand your value range and give you more room to experiment and add more value shapes to define that large area of light halftone.
