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@sebastian777
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11mo
added comment inProject - Portraits in Perspective
Asked for help
Very challenging project! I couldn't really figure out the first image in 2 point perspective and ended up making the cube in 3 point perspective. Really interested in learning what is it that I missed (or not). Then, I feel like I only got the hang of the exercise until image 5 and 6! Which is why I stopped drawing until I see Stan's demos and hopefully get some feedback before I make any assumptions of mine being correct or not.
@sebastian777
11mo
Did a couple more after watching Stan's demos! Really like these more!
Divya Kumar
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1yr
Asked for help
Study of David Malan's Artwork
I can see the proportions are off, it usually is the case with me. Also, poor space planning.
It was somewhat intimidating to start, I've never done a master study before this, but i enjoyed it a lot. I tried making confident lines, but i think i focus a lot on copying the lines instead of focusing on the technique and the essence.
Critiques please.
Your lines are amazing! You chose a very difficult pose but once you get to proportions and use those lines, it will look even cooler. In terms of proportions, something that could help would be to use plumb lines (straight lines from a point to another) to better position things in the drawing. For example, if you draw a straight, horizontal line from the top tip of the ear to the nose, it will be above the tip of the nose and touching the eye- in your drawing, the top tip of the ear doesn't align with the eye and it is touching the tip of the nose. Another one: if you draw a straight, vertical line from the tip of the nose to the chin, you will see that the almost touch each other- in your drawing, the chin goes beyond the tip of the nose, and that makes her face look too inclined. Hope that helps!
@sebastian777
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2yr
Asked for help
Ready to continue with the course! I don't know if I'm being too critical about my lines, but I feel like they are too controlled, and I don't know if that is a good or bad thing. Any opinions about them? Thank you!
@sebastian777
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2yr
First image is the first try. I made very complicated and added much more than 5 values. After watching the demo I understood much better what the exercise wanted from us, and I see that I need to work more on proportions. Also, I should’ve darken the light values a little bit more so it would have been easier to see the highlights. Any feedback would appreciated!
