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RaphaelleDae
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1yr
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Illustration design painting (Pls critique my work)I submitted this in a competition by an art store, but unfortunately, I didn't win. Basically, they want something that shows the knowledge and creativity gained through books and sharing your favorite books with others. That's not exactly it but that's what I remembered from their instructions.
This was inspired by Guillermo Del Toro's color scheme and vibe
Practice Painting using Ian Mcque's work as reference. I want to learn more about drawing mechs.
Sketch inspired by an episode from love death and robots. Feel free to critique. Thankss
Another painting of Miles Morales. I love this movie soo much. Also, I appreciate some critique. Thanks!
Steve Lenze
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2yr
Hey Raphaelle,
I like the vibe of this piece, pretty cool.
What I think you have to do when working out poses, is to fill it in to see the silhoette it makes. This is the eyes first read of the pose, and it should be clear.
In your pose, the left arm is missing, and when I fill in the pose, the silhoette looks unclear.
I did a quick sketch to show you how you could fix that.
As far as your painting, it's also a little confusing. Mostly because you have light areas that shouldn't be in the dark areas, and the color temp of the light is all over the place.
I did a quick paint over to show you what I mean, I hope all this is helpful :)
omg thank you for this, I'll definitely work on this. That silhouette tip is amazing.
since the movie will be out soon, i thought that i could make an entry. I can't tell if this is finished or i still need to work on it. I could some critiques.
Really cool painting!
I just love his techniques. Btw this is me dressed up as peter from hereditary for halloween.
