Felipe Lorenzo
Midwest
Hey! I'm a bit new to this whole art thing, but I am excited to see what is in store.
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Felipe Lorenzo
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added comment inHow to Simplify the Motion of the Torso – The Bean
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Here are some beans that I've done, critique is welcome!
Felipe Lorenzo
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4yr
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Hey, this is my first time doing any gesture drawing, id love to hear some critiques so I can improve on what I did wrong
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Hi Felipe! Good first time with these gestures. Try to make smoother lines and use the C and S curves a bit more. I like how you were using the center line of pose. These exercises are really helpful in learning to draw figures that look natural and organic vs stiff and ridged. Good work and keep going!
hi, Lorenzo. Props for trying out gesture drawings.
I have noticed that your poses are very stiff. you can improve by trying to improve your line, I recommend you grab your pencil from the end, and use your shoulder to draw. Now, in your poses I feel that you focus a lot on the contour, and not the fluidity of the pose. I would recommend you start by practicing your line with S C I strokes. Good luck.
Wow you got some really expressive poses! Though you might try to loosen up the way you treat form in general. Some of them are still kinda robotic and uncanny, try to FEEL the form. Also try to capture one single main line of action, this makes the pose more solid and vivid.
