I think you got the value and shape on the pupil and iris pretty good.You also rendered the eyelash pretty well.
My biggest critique is the fact that I think you made the left upper eyelid a bit too light.I recommend darkening them to atleast the same value as the Iris.(Here's an example by Nicolai Fechin where he darkens the side of the eyes,if that help)
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