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Warren Bonett
Warren Bonett
Melbourne, Australia
Freelance graphic designer and illustrator wanting to go back to basics
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Jesper Axelsson
@Chris Bodary, @johnercek, @Samuel Eli, sorry for not getting back to you earlier (the drawing has kept me busy!). I really appreciated your comments! Here's some more work in progress: the figure brought into perspective and the 2 value notan. Do you think the notan reads? Cheers!
Warren Bonett
Seriously ambitious pose. Great work! The things I notice in the line work that may need adjustment are: the connection of the bicep and extensor flexors of the forearm; the upper thigh into hip feels a touch narrow making the torso a little long; and the right leg’s feels like it needs to be read a little more from above. Is this from imagination? It’s terrific. The notan lighting source appears to be the viewer, I feel like it may read little more of the dynamism of the character if it swung a little further to the right or left, but that’s just being picky really. Impressive work.
Warren Bonett
It looks good I have no advice I’m afraid a bit beyond my skills. It looks like a great start! Quite the challenge! Look forward to seeing the result.
Jesper Axelsson
Thank you!
Warren Bonett
A couple more of these mannequins. I draw using sanguine before I watch the demo, then I watch the demo. Then I go back to the model and use my sanguine more as a gesture/bean under drawing and try to check my landmarks and negative shapes as I go. Amazing how many mistakes I find even when I finish this second pass, where I’m trying so hard to “see” the model and the shapes.
Jesper Axelsson
I think you're doing a great job with the mannequins! When I submitted mine for critique, I got the advice to indicate the groundplane, by using either shadows or perspective lines, to make the figures feel more grounded Cheers!
Warren Bonett
Great exercise! I’m finding it pretty difficult I have to say. I’ve uploaded these in reverse order. My first two crouching man and twisting woman. Pretty stiff looking, but teaching me to look harder. I reckon I could spend a year just doing these figures. I won’t but they may be all I concentrate on for the rest of the year. We’ll see.
Hofan
2yr
using two different colours for the lines is so smart !!
Warren Bonett
Finding the shapes on the robo bean a bit difficult to get my head around. I draw what I’m seeing but often it’s quite different from Stan’s. Perhaps if I do another few hundred I might get more into the flow? 🙃 think I’ll do the foreshortening one then do a few dozen without him as a guide then come back to the videos. Wish me luck😀😀
Jesper Axelsson
Really nice!
Warren Bonett
I’m trying to do both 🙂. And animals. I bounce between each, and try to find ways of incorporating all of them into single compositions. I’m sure there are many good reasons to concentrate on single subjects but I prefer to nudge everything forward a bit than charge with one. It also helps me do what I want which is to illustrate stories and create narrative artworks. Ive not done any courses in painting but I’ve found lots of helpful tips online as a starting place. I intend on doing a couple of Michael James Smith’s workshops before I decide which more complete course I’ll take. NMA’s one looks good.
Jesper Axelsson
Thanks for this! "NMA’s one looks good" Thanks for checking :)
Vigo
Hi! I could really use some feedback! What do you think?
Warren Bonett
Nice work.
Warren Bonett
First attempts at landmark drawing without Proko to guide me. Sometimes mighty hard to see the scapula under the muscles. And working out the deltoid connections. And I seem to have a pathological habit of making the legs a little too short. I’ll do some female figures before I move on to robobean. And I can see I’ll need to do the anatomy course! I’ve used photos from the academic male collection available on this site.
Warren Bonett
Been using what I’ve learned in portrait fundamentals to try to improve my animal drawings and paintings. I think I’m starting to understand the shapes better.... maybe. Long way to go still. Anyway thought it a good upload for Proktober.
Warren Bonett
Drew a bunch of portraits using what I’ve learned in the course. The youngest one was hardest by far, so much so that I needed to grid. So much to learn. Certainly better than I had done before it though. Am doing the figure drawing course now but will return to this one afterwards as repetition is crucial.
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