My goal is to be employed doing character design work for a game or animation studio (either is fine). I've had an opportunity to take an art test with two animation studios but came up short. Since then I've been gradually revamping my portfolio though it's still a work in progress. Any feedback on what my work might be lacking is appreciated.

Here's my entry! The genre is modern/urban fantasy and the poster features the personifications of my Id and Superego