Hi Mic! I would only have made the wrinkles on the sides of the nose and mouth less pronounced, as they look a bit puppet-like. Maybe draw in pencil, that way a correction like this will be very easy, it's not a big deal. :)

Hi Mic! I like your composition, how you placed more detail on the facial features than in the clothes or hair and how she is not straight in the center of the page. If I was the one trying to improve it, I would probably focus on less but more mindful and confident strokes.

There's really nice confidence in your lines around the hair bun. The energy in those lines makes the structure of her hairstyle feel really solid. Good work!

Hey Mic, nice job with showing age in this drawing. I think what would help is if you added more structure to your drawing. The best way to do that is to use the Loomis head as a way to line up the features. I did a draw over to show you how it can help. Proko did a free video about it on youtube if you have any questions. I hope this helps you out, keep drawing :)

Thank you everyone so much for your kind reviews and guidance. Feeling very appreciative of this community!